Nowadays, more and more people from different cities are spending more time away from their families. What are the possible reasons and effects one the people themselves and their families?

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In the 21st century working or studying abroad has become the main thing in our life.
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makes many people
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far away from their families. In
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topic, explaining the reason, and the effects of living far away from families. From the firsthand, working or studying abroad is the
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reason for living in another place. as result, many people looking for a better salary, or new experience, or famous Universities.
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other reasons for travelling.
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, taking a tour of other cities, or visiting relatives and friends. Even though these short trips do not have the same effects as travelling for study and work.
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, spending
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away has many effects. sometimes it’s good for the traveller or his family and
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it is bad for both. On the one side, that person can have a good work experience, or a good quality teaching or a nice trip and learn about a new culture. on the other side,
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person and his family suffer to be far from each other. For ,example parents miss or have trouble living far from their sons or daughters’ children growing far from one of their parents or wife missing her husband. To conclude, sometimes living away is a nice experience for someone, but at the same
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if it takes a long
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, it is had a bad effect on the family or the person himself. In my opinion, if you are one-off those who are travelling for a long
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try to study the advantages and the disadvantage,
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you can make your decision.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Professional commitments
  • Economic factors
  • Career opportunities
  • Demanding careers
  • High-paying jobs
  • Higher education
  • Prestigious universities
  • Specialized training programs
  • Economic opportunities
  • Living costs
  • Healthcare services
  • Medical treatments
  • Feeling of loneliness
  • Stress levels
  • Mental health issues
  • Lack of family support
  • Close relationships
  • Weakened family bonds
  • Communication gaps
  • Emotional distress
  • Physical separation
  • Strain on marital relationships
  • Parenting
  • Personal freedom
  • Social interactions
  • Lifestyle choices
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