Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Others think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are two general opinions regarding advertising. In

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, some

people

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believe that it is remarkably successful at convincing us to purchase several kinds of

stuff

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;

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, others’ perspective is that it is so common these days and it has lost its impact on

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and

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pay

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no attention to it anymore. In my point of view,

propaganda

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always has its influence on us to lure us to buy

things

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, especially nowadays, the ways by which companies try to advertise their pieces of

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are more effective compared to the past.

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with, the

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group

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of individuals think that advertising is significantly successful at compelling us to buy

things

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. In

fact

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, they believe advertising is an effective approach

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presenting and showing the products to folk and maybe the reason behind

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success is

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fact

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that by smart methods of presenting

things

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by companies, they put the idea into

people

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’s

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that their

stuff

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is great. By way of illustration, the

first

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group

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believe that there is a reason

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someone goes to buy,

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,

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apply

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toothpaste among various brands which are at approximately the same price which is

propaganda

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.

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, the

second

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group

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say that

propaganda

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is not as efficient as it was in the past and they think it has turned into a routine thing for folk. They believe that almost all

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advertisements, nowadays, have just

one

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aim which is selling their products to

people

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and now individuals are aware of his phenomenon, they may think,

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, that in advertisements companies try to exaggerate the features of their goods and in

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case, nobody believes in them anymore. In conclusion, two common beliefs are prevalent among

people

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. The

first

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one

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deals with the effectiveness of advertising

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persuading us to buy goods and the

second

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one

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is about the uselessness of that. The

first

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folk support their idea theory with

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this

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fact

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that

people

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’s choice in purchasing pieces of

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have

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a cause which is

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.

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, the

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individuals support their idea with

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this

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fact

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that these days everybody knows the main goal of advertising which is luring

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to buy

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. In my opinion, advertising absolutely has a substantial influence on folk’s

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and I believe that the

second

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group

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too;

nevertheless

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, they are not aware of that

due to

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the professional method of advertising nowadays.