Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Others think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are two general opinions regarding advertising. In

fact

, some

people

believe that it is remarkably successful at convincing us to purchase several kinds of

stuff

;

however

, others’ perspective is that it is so common these days and it has lost its impact on

people

and

one

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no attention to it anymore. In my point of view,

propaganda

always has its influence on us to lure us to buy

things

, especially nowadays, the ways by which companies try to advertise their pieces of

stuff

are more effective compared to the past.

To begin

with, the

first

group

of individuals think that advertising is significantly successful at compelling us to buy

things

. In

fact

, they believe advertising is an effective approach

of

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presenting and showing the products to folk and maybe the reason behind

this

success is

this

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fact

that by smart methods of presenting

things

by companies, they put the idea into

people

’s

mind

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minds

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that their

stuff

is great. By way of illustration, the

first

group

believe that there is a reason

when

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why

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someone goes to buy,

for example

,

a

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toothpaste among various brands which are at approximately the same price which is

propaganda

.

On the other hand

, the

second

group

say that

propaganda

is not as efficient as it was in the past and they think it has turned into a routine thing for folk. They believe that almost all

the

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advertisements, nowadays, have just

one

aim which is selling their products to

people

and now individuals are aware of his phenomenon, they may think,

furthermore

, that in advertisements companies try to exaggerate the features of their goods and in

this

case, nobody believes in them anymore. In conclusion, two common beliefs are prevalent among

people

. The

first

one

deals with the effectiveness of advertising

at

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persuading us to buy goods and the

second

one

is about the uselessness of that. The

first

folk support their idea theory with

this

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the

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fact

that

people

’s choice in purchasing pieces of

stuff

have

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a cause which is

propaganda

.

In contrast

, the

second

individuals support their idea with

this

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the

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fact

that these days everybody knows the main goal of advertising which is luring

people

to buy

things

. In my opinion, advertising absolutely has a substantial influence on folk’s

choice

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and I believe that the

second

group

too;

nevertheless

, they are not aware of that

due to

the professional method of advertising nowadays.