People believe that not all school children have the natural ability to learn new language schools should not force school children to study a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Language
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is a form of communication in modern society. There are more than thousands of
language
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languages
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speaking currently. Schools usually teach two languages
such
as English and Spanish and some people believe that children may not be able to handle studying two
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at the same time. In my point of view, I disagree that school children do not have the natural ability to learn a new
language
.
To begin
with, most of the primary schools have created
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reasonable environment for
students
to learn a new
language
, apart from their mother
language
.
This
practise
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helps
students
to learn through their daily lives
such
as joining the English Drama
soceity
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society
and Chinese Writing
soceity
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society
.
Furthermore
, the course syllabus has been designed to suit the age grade of
students
so that it would not become a burden
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students
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