Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In Asia, the majority of
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start their degrees in the same
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as finishing school or college. In western countries,
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might take a
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out before starting university. There are, from my perspective, two principal reasons why taking a gap
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would be a good idea.
Students
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might know better what major they exactly want to
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. From 1968, people have to take 9-
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compulsory education in Taiwan, which means all
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will learn basic knowledge and
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the same subjects
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as mandarin, mathematics, or society. After finishing school,
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will face the problem — which territory should they choose? Some
students
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probably follow the way whose parents decide. Other
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might feel confused about what kind of area of
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should they select or will be suitable. Of course, it
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depends on what score they got.
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, in
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situation, how if they select to take a
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out before starting university? It would be a great idea to take a gap
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to travel or gain work experience. Without pressure from school,
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might enjoy their journey more, meet different people, experience different lifestyles or cultures. These feelings and experiences would inspire them to consider their future deeply and will make clear in discovering what kind of territory they want to gain more knowledge.
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,
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will not waste time in the area of
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in which they are not interested. Before starting university, people can find a job which they are interested in and gain some work experience. If they found out
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not suitable, they would still have chance and time to look for another area of job. These experiences will support them to choose more ideal and suitable areas of
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for them. Overall, life is short, and taking a gap
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benefits
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to define their future. If the
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is planned carefully, it will not be wasted.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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