Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At present,

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of young

people

turn up to

university

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to pursue higher education and a smaller

number

of students choose to study vocational courses. As a few

people

show preference towards skilled training, a huge

demand

and supply gap may arise in

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market. So, I strongly agree that predominant high school graduates should be provided

incentive

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to join professional training. Focused on the increasing

number

of unemployed university graduates and the surging

demand

of workers in vocational jobs,

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essay will discuss why the youths ought to be encouraged

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in occupational training. To commence with, the

number

of universities pass out who are jobless is rising rapidly. A study by MQU revealed that the total

number

of unemployed

people

with

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degree

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is growing up every year by nearly double. If

this

trend continues for

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more years,

people

with advanced education may face several social and economic issues. The nations around the world may have the largest

number

of idle

people

with university degrees.

On the other hand

, the

demand

for workers with vocational training is climbing up steeply. A market survey by a job advertisement company found that several business firms are looking for skilled workers with professional training

however

they are unable to fill the vacant positions. The lack of professionally trained

people

in the companies

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the healthy growth of business corporations.

Furthermore

, the gap in

demand

and supply of occupationally trained

people

impact

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economy. In conclusion, encouraging students to study professional courses help to solve the issue of joblessness and supply shortage of vocationally trained

people

. I strongly recommend urging

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of youths to join skilled courses.