Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial, perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?
These days
children
are experiencing too much Use synonyms
pressure
from educational and communal, business panorama, it is happening because of the terrific demands of Use synonyms
life
. While it is important to advance the skills and adaptability to become a better adult going forward, they must be protected from mounting Use synonyms
pressure
by maintaining the balance between material and psychological growth.
The main problem caused by academic, social and commercial perspectives is the demand for Use synonyms
life
has increased considerably, Use synonyms
for example
, every child wants an attractive school bag and best-looking gadgets, lavish lifestyle, so to get it, one has to work hard, which leads to Linking Words
pressure
to win the competition of studies. Use synonyms
Moreover
, unless Linking Words
parents
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pressure
on their Use synonyms
children
, they do not proceed or strive hard to go out of their comfort zone and succeed. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
parents
do have to maintain their status in the social environment, which leads to forcing Use synonyms
children
to study hard and practice to win various competitions. To illustrate, if in casual meetings are workplace, Use synonyms
parents
discuss Use synonyms
kids
, and one of the Use synonyms
parents
says that his or her child failed, it will be an embarrassing situation for him or her.
There are multiple measures possible to reduce the Use synonyms
stress
on offspring. Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
parents
should scale up the education level for their Use synonyms
kids
, so that study will be easier for them. Namely, if the entire English dictionary is taught to Use synonyms
kids
, they will find reading books as completely Use synonyms
stress
-free, which will lead to an easier grasping of the subjects and grand success without any Use synonyms
stress
for pupils. Use synonyms
Secondly
, if competitive exams are bringing failure to students, if there is no dependency on education success to have a better financial Linking Words
life
as an adult going forward, Use synonyms
then
one can study without Linking Words
stress
. Use synonyms
For instance
, if a family has a great business, Linking Words
then
the educational success of the kid is not necessary, because it does not matter, a kid does not have to clear any interview. Linking Words
Finally
, if Linking Words
parents
understand that there is no point in increasing Use synonyms
pressure
for Use synonyms
kids
, Use synonyms
then
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kids
can have Use synonyms
stress
free Use synonyms
life
.
All things considered, Use synonyms
stress
-free Use synonyms
life
will lead to peace of mind for students, the Use synonyms
children
today are being put into a ‘survival-of-the fittest’ situation much earlier than they must be when they should really be trying to do their best. Use synonyms
Therefore
, we must ensure that development may be induced by well in advance knowledge than required.Linking Words
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