It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The natural
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talent
is questionable, can it be taught or
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need to be born with it? It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents.
Nevertheless
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others argue that abilities can be learned.
However
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being really good at something isn´t the same thing as having
a
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talent
. Some people defend that someone with
talent
is
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natural and can have some skills without learning
it
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them
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. Especially in arts, sports or music a child with a “gift” or
talent
can learn faster than others. If you have two persons having exactly the same music classes
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example, you can´t assume that they will have the same skills, even if they practice the same, one of them can achieve a level that the other one will never achieve even if he dedicates all he has.
This
is what differentiates having or not
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talent
.
On the other hand
, it can be claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Some people believe that if you work hard you can learn and become actually good at something, even if you didn´t
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with the
talent
for it. Teachers have technique and experience and can teach their students, but they can´t give them the
talent
, because
talent
can´t be learnt. In my point of view,
talent
alone is not enough. Even if you have the
talent
, it has to be explored and pushed to show
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potential. If someone has the
talent
but don´t do anything about it, another person that works really hard but
don´t
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have the
talent
can achieve better results. Why is that?
Last
but not least, I think humans have the ability to learn and acquire
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competences
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because of the world and society we live in, not just due to our genes and “talents”.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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