The government and individuals are spending too much money on national celebrations like New Year or festivals. Do you agree or disagree?
We are dependent on social heritage, which is a mixture of customs, traditions, moral values, attitudes,
festivals
, folklore, beliefs and ideas not only makes us who we are but binds us to pass it on from one generation to another. Use synonyms
Festivals
act like stress relievers and help us balance our emotions. More positivity naturally lowers negativity. It Use synonyms
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provides an opportunity to reduce friction and brings estranged friends and relatives together in a bond of love. Linking Words
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, nothing brings people together as Linking Words
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do. They play a pivotal role in nation-building; bringing people from every religious, economic and social background together.
I do agree that Use synonyms
festivals
are an expressive way to celebrate glorious heritage, culture and traditions. When it comes to Pakistan it becomes very true because if look into the statistic we will find out that Pakistanis spend billions of dollars on their national, religious and cultural days Use synonyms
celebrations
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celebrations
sales fetch up to 25 billion rupees and sales in the holy month of Ramadan meet the average rate of 250 billion rupees. Same as we spend trillions of rupees on special events like three Eids, Independence Use synonyms
Day
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, Resolution Use synonyms
Day
and many other events. Despite all these facts the outcome which we get at the end of these Use synonyms
celebrations
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generations and most importantly brotherhood enrichment make Linking Words
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financial factor less important and significant in all Linking Words
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I would like to conclude Linking Words
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by saying that the strength of a nation standing behinds the lines of unity, faith, discipline, brotherhood and happiness which comes from Linking Words
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celebrations
nationwide should have to be met at any cost. So in my view government or individuals spending not much on Use synonyms
such
vital and crucial events which means a lot to a nation.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite