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Writing Samples
Band 6.5

a friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on a holiday. write a letter to your friend. * give contact details for when you are away. * give instructions about how to care for your pet. * describe your household duties.

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Dear Smita,
First,
I would like to thank you for accepting my request to come over and look after my pet and my house on short notice.
This
 is my emergency contact number 4376634556 in case you need any help or get confused feel free to contact me any time. I have posted
this
 number and the schedule of my dog on the fridge for easy access. Rio likes to go for a walk twice daily morning around 7am and
evening
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 approx 6pm. You can give
hime
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him
 his biscuits in his dish once in the morning and 1 cup of milk in the evening. You can find his food in
kitchen
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a kitchen
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 pantry.
However
, just make sure he drinks fresh water daily. I would like you to water my plants too, especially the ones which are
in
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on
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 the balcony as they need to be watered daily. The plants which are indoors
needs
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need
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 to be watered once every alternate day. And,
finally
 for security
purpose
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purposes
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 please clear my mailbox and make sure the doors are locked all
time
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the time
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. I appreciate your kind help and I will see you soon on my return. Yours, Bhavika
Submitted by bhavika.a.siroya on

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grammar
Ensure to revise your letter for minor grammatical errors and typos, such as 'hime' instead of 'him', and 'needs to be watered' instead of 'need to be watered'.
tone
Consider providing a brief emotional context or more personalized touch to deepen the friendly tone, such as sharing a small anecdote about Rio.
content
The letter effectively covers all required points: contact details, instructions for caring for the pet, and household duties.
tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and polite, which is appropriate for writing to a friend.
structure
The structure of the letter is clear, and each paragraph focuses on a single idea, making it easy to follow.
structure
The opening and closing of the letter are well-crafted, maintaining a warm and personal touch throughout.
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