Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level off sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
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high levels of Correct the article-noun agreement
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which are dangerous for public health. Use synonyms
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products
should be more expensive to prevent Use synonyms
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from buying. I disagree with the statement because it isn't a sustainable method for encouraging Use synonyms
people
in consuming less Use synonyms
sugar
. I believe adding Use synonyms
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tax
without increasing a selling price and enforcing Use synonyms
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in taking care of public health are Use synonyms
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tax
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sugar
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This
will force manufactures to produce quality foods, Linking Words
otherwise
, they will receive less Linking Words
profit
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Moreover
, producing healthy Linking Words
products
is the responsibility of manufactures, whereas raising a selling price implies that the responsibility is pushed to consumers. Use synonyms
For example
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profit
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sugar
while the soft drink gains more margin. Use synonyms
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and will need to find an alternative Use synonyms
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innovations
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In addition
, manufacturers that produce unhealthy Linking Words
products
should pay society back. Everyone needs to take responsibility for their actions include the manufactures. If they create a negative effect (provide unhealthy food) on society, they need to take some action to cover a public loss. Use synonyms
For instance
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encourage
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encouraging
people
to do healthy activities.
To summarise, raising the price of Use synonyms
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sugar
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products
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to make Use synonyms
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sugar
. Keeping a Use synonyms
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tax
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companies
to do CRS is a better Use synonyms
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. These two strategies will prevent any Use synonyms
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will encourage the producers to do good activities for the public. I believe Correct pronoun usage
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