A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: • Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. • Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. • Give details of when you would be available for work.

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Dear Sir, I would like to express my interest to apply for the voluntary position that was advertised in the Times newspaper on the 28th January 2021. I am interested to work in the museum because I think that I could enrich my knowledge about ancient objects on which I am planning to do a project for my final year.

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, I noticed that it is a part-time position and I still need some time to prepare for my studies.

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, when I was in high school, I had an opportunity to work as a volunteer in a local museum where I assisted in arranging the objects on display and answering the phone calls. I believe I have relevant experience to work in

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position. I am available anytime at your convenience. Please reach me on my mobile or by email. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jeevi.S

jeeanayTue Dec 28 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Enthusiastic
Volunteer
Part-time
Unpaid work
Museum director
Skills and qualities
Customer service
Organization
Team player
Flexible
Reliable
Positive attitude
Availability
Professional goals
Community contribution
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