Instructions Read the question below and write a letter. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club. Write a letter to the manager of the golf club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you could start

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you because I am decided to do a half-time job at your

golf

club located near Tambaram. My self, John. I have finished three years of Diploma courses in sports in the year of 2017 in Pune with great performance.

However

, during my class journey, I have participated in many events conducted by the government. And

also

, I have received a championship award in the year 2018.

Additionally

, I have completed my three months crash practice course in the field of

golf

Although

, I have two years of experience in the area of coaching sports like a

golf

club, basketball court, and other sports-related activities conducted by national level and state-level tournaments.

Hence

, I am fascinated to do a temporary job in your

golf

club. So, I am planning to initiate my work from Monday onwards. I am looking forward to your kind response. Yours faithfully, John.

Submitted by Bhavani Viswanathan on Wed Dec 29 2021

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

153 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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