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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

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As can be seen, a lot of
food
 in restaurants becomes
waste
 every day as
people
 do not finish consuming the
food
.
However
,
food
waste
 still becomes a big concern.
This
 essay will explain the causes of
this
 reason and how to solve it. There are two main reasons behind the increasing amount of
food
waste
.
First
 thing
first
,
people
 nowadays have more
income
 than before. According to recent research in my university, the average
income
 of a family was around 1000 baht in 1690;
on the other hand
, in 2021, the average
income
 of a family had dramatically climbed up to 12000 baht.
Secondly
, there are a large number of
people
 misunderstand about the method of losing weight. Some
people
 still believe that the more they eat, the more they get fat. To solve the
food
waste
 issue, we arranged an idea that we will make a new chemical that has the ability to make
waste
food
 scatter out into smaller pieces that are as small as a powder.
Therefore
, the
waste
food
 can be fully decomposed easily in a short period of time. To do
this
,
this
 chemical should compose the same elements and properties as Sodium Hydroxide. In conclusion, we will repeat the two reasons why
waste
food
 is still a global issue. One is because of the number of
people
 having more
income
 these days. Another reason is that
people
 still have misbelief about how to go on a diet. In order to
this
 issue, we
then
 plan to create a chemical that enables
food
waste
 to split from each other into smaller particles and easily decompose into nature.
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