Some people think that children under 18 years old should receive full-time education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The question as to whether or not to force

children

under the age of eighteen to obtain a full-time

education

program sparked intense debate recently. While many people claim that it is compulsory for students to study full time, I am not convinced that

this

issue is not suitable in modern society to some extent.

To begin

with, full-time

education

has an injurious influence on

children

’s mentality. Students are at the risk of being overwhelmed as there is too much information to absorb. Each individual has their abilities to study

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so that they are unable to take in a large amount of knowledge, which may lead to misunderstanding of

education

.

Moreover

,

parents

may put a lot of academic pressure on their own

children

. They have more tendency to cause psychological problems

such

as depression, sleeplessness, intense stress, etc.

This

is a state of emergency and the only solution is that adults need to care more about the

children

than putting pressure on them

In addition

, while receiving full-time

education

will open up numerous opportunities in many fields of life, it is still a financial burden for those who cannot afford high tuition.

For example

, as most South Asian countries are agriculture, in some rural areas,

children

have to lend a hand working on a farm with their

parents

to acquire a likelihood.

However

, the money they earn from farming is not enough to obtain their

children

a full-time

education

program as they have to pay enormous amounts of money for fees

such

as the cost of tax, insurance cost, etc. It may place a level of draining financial resources on some non-resident

parents

that restricts their capacity to have adequate enlightenment of their offspring. All things considered, the obvious conclusion to be drawn is that despite the fact that full-time

education

for

children

under the age of eighteen has great impacts on their future lives, its negative aspects still need to be considered thoroughly as the benefits cannot outweigh those drawbacks at all. As far as I am concerned,

parents

should contemplate before registering for

this

enlightenment program.