Some people think that children under 18 years old should receive full-time education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The question as to whether or not to force
children
under the age of eighteen to obtain a full-time education
program sparked intense debate recently. While many people claim that it is compulsory for students to study full time, I am not convinced that this
issue is not suitable in modern society to some extent.
To begin
with, full-time education
has an injurious influence on children
’s mentality. Students are at the risk of being overwhelmed as there is too much information to absorb. Each individual has their abilities to study,
so that they are unable to take in a large amount of knowledge, which may lead to misunderstanding of Remove the comma
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education
. Moreover
, parents
may put a lot of academic pressure on their own children
. They have more tendency to cause psychological problems such
as depression, sleeplessness, intense stress, etc. This
is a state of emergency and the only solution is that adults need to care more about the children
than putting pressure on them
In addition
, while receiving full-time education
will open up numerous opportunities in many fields of life, it is still a financial burden for those who cannot afford high tuition. For example
, as most South Asian countries are agriculture, in some rural areas, children
have to lend a hand working on a farm with their parents
to acquire a likelihood. However
, the money they earn from farming is not enough to obtain their children
a full-time education
program as they have to pay enormous amounts of money for fees such
as the cost of tax, insurance cost, etc. It may place a level of draining financial resources on some non-resident parents
that restricts their capacity to have adequate enlightenment of their offspring.
All things considered, the obvious conclusion to be drawn is that despite the fact that full-time education
for children
under the age of eighteen has great impacts on their future lives, its negative aspects still need to be considered thoroughly as the benefits cannot outweigh those drawbacks at all. As far as I am concerned, parents
should contemplate before registering for this
enlightenment program.Submitted by doibichhoa on
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