Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are conflicting that

apartment

building

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for workers should be constructed in

parks

and

gardens

nearby

city

center

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instead

of long commuting.

This

essay will discuss both sides of the argument and prove my opinion at the end. On the one hand, it is

good

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idea

that

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up

apartment

building

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in

parks

and

gardens

close

city

center

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. The

idea

would

makes

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that

people

can save many times to travel forth and back to work. The commuters would use

time

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for

self improvement

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or with their family and their friends by shorter

distance

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to work.

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, it is possible

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that the workers could reduce their stress because normally,

people

get

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by commuting.

On the other hand

, it can not make sure that the

people

can live at the

apartment

building which is located in

parks

and

gardens

around

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center

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. Generally,

people

who live around

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areas have a budget issue to live around

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center

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. Even, destroying

gardens

and

parks

would trigger

to

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environmental issues as well. Recently protecting natural environment comes to the fore in the world for

stoping

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pollution. In conclusion, it is true that constructing

apartment

building

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in

parks

and

gardens

nearby

city

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center

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instead

of long commuting is a good

idea

but, the way gives harmful consequences of

natural

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the natural

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environment, and

also

I agree that it is not

best

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the best

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idea

, and we can substitute other ideas.

for example

, developing subway or build new bridges for

shorter

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a shorter

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distance to access to cities.