you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers Offered to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

Dear sir or madam, I am writing
this
letter in connection with your article about my
city
centre. I have been living in Tehran for more or less 15 years and I would like to present my opinion about your claims in the newspaper. The centre of the
city
is clearly very crowded as you mentioned and the traffic congestion is overwhelming like other cities in my country.
Also
, living in
this
area is pretty time consuming you are absolutely right and
that is
because of the traffic jam obviously.
Although
, there is a world of difference in public transportation in my
city
rather than in other cities. What really is important is that buses and trains are all punctual which makes people have a proper plan for themselves. I believe most
city
centres are not provided with on-time and state of the art transits. Anyway, I would like to offer you a guided tour of my town to show you all the up-to-date systems and services we have.
this
is all I would like to share with you. Thank you for taking the time to read
this
letter. Yours faithfully,
Submitted by qazaalameri on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing in response to
  • the article published in your newspaper
  • I would like to express my disagreement with
  • the claim made in the article that
  • I agree with some points raised in the article
  • However, I believe that there are significant differences in my town center
  • One notable difference is
  • Another way in which my town center stands out is
  • Furthermore,
  • In addition to
  • I would be more than happy to offer
  • a guided tour of my town
  • to the writer of the article
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