Some people argue that school should no longer be necessary because children can obtain all the information that they need form the internet. They can learn and be educated at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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has been used as an educational tool due to its rapid development which allows

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and teachers to give lessons, homework and assignments online.

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the

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for research and extra readings.

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,

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are still irreplaceable by the

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in terms of the weakness of the

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and the essential role of

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.

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is undoubtedly a very powerful and useful tool to teach

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but only depends on the way we use it.

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lack of teachers' guidance will lead to teenager

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addiction as many of them lack self-discipline and spend so much time on irrelevant websites. What's more, tons of information uploaded on the

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is not in a one-hundred

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accuracy,

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, youngsters can not distinguish right and wrong without

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explanation and prove.

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, to make good use of the

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, the teacher role is vitally important and must not be eliminated. School is a mini-society for the adolescents before entering the real world, where it is not only a place to gain knowledge

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but a place to train their social skills

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as communication, interpersonal and presentation skill.

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, apart from family,

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can build their values and attitude through teachers and classmates who could only experience it but not by words and images. In

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advantages, the

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is clearly not able to provide emotional and soft skills only by written information. To conclude, the

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is absolutely a very helpful assistant when

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want to obtain more information and knowledge outside classes, but,

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sometimes, there are more skills and experience they could earn from

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and peers which is not able to replace by electronic parts.