Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial, perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?
In today's era , offspring are feeling the burden of
studies
, surrounding and commercial, and judging them. The main reason is too many subjects competition in a short interval of time. This
problem can be solved by implementing practical knowledge.
Firstly
, children need to prepare their work
within a semester almost in 4 months, that is
not possible for all the students
because every student has own capacity to read and learn things if teachers
impose too much work
on students
they cut themselves from studies
. As a result
, they may unable to perform well in academics. For example
, my friend is an average student, he get only passing marks , but when teachers
give us too much work
then
, he got punishment because he is not capable to handle so much work
in a short time. Moreover
, parents always compare their kids with their fellow students
which break their self-confidence because they are not fulfilling their parent's expectations.
However
, teachers
should make studies
more interesting to include practical knowledge and make them more creative so, children can imagine things and think unique. For instance
, students
think math is a boring subject because it is based on formulas and fundamentals, therefore
, the teacher should change their teaching methods and make it more interesting and easy so, everyone understands it. Furthermore
, teachers
should build a level of understanding and trust between the relationships of teacher-student that will help students
to share their problems with teachers
.
In conclusion, although
children become fade-up from studies
due to high expectations and difficulty level of studies
, it can be solved by taking right decisions like good understanding and knowing about the strength and weaknesses of the student then
, work
on it.Submitted by grewalpt1249 on
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