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Nuclear power is used both for weapons of mass destruction and the production of cheap, clean energy. Do the advantages of nuclear power outweigh the disadvantages?

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The picture illustrates the recycling process that has been followed with plastic bottles—broken down into nine steps. The stages start from collecting the domestic house to producing
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 as clothes, stationery, and other products from recycled bottles.
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 operation can be repeated endlessly since it is
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 cycle. Looking at the picture, we can see that the recycling process starts with individuals throwing their litter in a recycle bin.
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, the rubbish is collected by special recycling trucks, which are
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 to be sorted out. After that, the recycled plastic waste is pressed into compact blocks. These are
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 crushed into fine paces machine washed and entered into the plastic pellets. Later the pellets are heated to be used as raw material.
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, the primary material is packed and dispatch to different factories to produce new products.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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