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It is true that these days people travel to severe weather challenging places for the experience to live in a different habitat. Travel to such places

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 rapid disappearance of certain plants and animals has caused some people to believe
this
 is a huge environmental loss for the modern world.
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, it is
also
 argued that humanity still faces even bigger challenges, the climate change as an obvious example.
This
 essay will investigate how two groups defend their claims and provide the writer’s view in a debate. On the one side of the argument, a number of people believe that the extinction of some kinds of fauna and flora may cause permanent damage to the current vulnerable ecosystem, potentially leading to
further
 loss of many other species. Picturing world as a place where lots of animals are struggling to sustain their lives with increasingly rare
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 of food which mainly include
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other animals and vegetables and plants are dying as
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the soil
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 becomes much less fertile due to the reduction of probiotics,
this
 group of people draws a connection between the recent losses and the future of a broken ecosystem in which one death of
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specie may lead to another, or even a number, of the others. On the other side of the argument, climate change appears to attract a great deal of concern for the fear that not only the wild but
also
 mankind will suffer the catastrophic aftermaths of
this
 environmental problem. While agreeing that the world will witness many species rushing towards their extinction, supporters of
this
 view take a closer look at how crucial factors that are vital for human life
such
 as clean air and living environment and
fresh water
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 are deteriorating at
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level
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. They believe if bold action combating climate change is not about to be taken, it would not take much time for human civilization to follow the path of extinction.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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