It is true that these days people travel to severe weather challenging places for the experience to live in a different habitat. Travel to such places

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rapid disappearance of certain plants and animals has caused some people to believe

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is a huge environmental loss for the modern world.

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, it is

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argued that humanity still faces even bigger challenges, the climate change as an obvious example.

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essay will investigate how two groups defend their claims and provide the writer’s view in a debate. On the one side of the argument, a number of people believe that the extinction of some kinds of fauna and flora may cause permanent damage to the current vulnerable ecosystem, potentially leading to

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loss of many other species. Picturing world as a place where lots of animals are struggling to sustain their lives with increasingly rare

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of food which mainly include

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other animals and vegetables and plants are dying as

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the soil

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becomes much less fertile due to the reduction of probiotics,

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group of people draws a connection between the recent losses and the future of a broken ecosystem in which one death of

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specie may lead to another, or even a number, of the others. On the other side of the argument, climate change appears to attract a great deal of concern for the fear that not only the wild but

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mankind will suffer the catastrophic aftermaths of

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environmental problem. While agreeing that the world will witness many species rushing towards their extinction, supporters of

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view take a closer look at how crucial factors that are vital for human life

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as clean air and living environment and

fresh water

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are deteriorating at

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level

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. They believe if bold action combating climate change is not about to be taken, it would not take much time for human civilization to follow the path of extinction.