Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

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Nowadays different
countries
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are open with
business
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as well as cultural contact.Investment in
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Industrialisation
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more often a trend in nearby
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.
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Ancient
history shows that
business
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activities between
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has
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been done a long time ago.
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in Asia China Indonesia and Malaysia has proven that
barter
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system
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place as well as Spain and
Philippines
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the Philippines
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present
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day since
industrilitation
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industrialisation
industrialization
and
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aggressive
inovation
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innovation
in
bussiness
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business
. Different
countries
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supports
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business
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development in
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a way of investing in import and export
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.Cultural contact is evident since other
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need
foriegn
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foreign
workers to
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fill up
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there
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labor
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labour
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workforce
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work force
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.Workers from other
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introduce
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cultural ways.
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hand
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some believe that national identity
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disappear
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way,
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more imported goods and brand will boast in the
bussiness
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business
local
entrepnuer
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entrepreneur
will suffer most.
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