Internet is a great source of information and has opened up opportunities for all people to learn all over the world. Some people think all information reliable on the internet. Rest think otherwise. What is your opinion?
In
contemporary
era, humankind Add an article
the contemporary
use
the Change the verb form
uses
internet
to search
knowledge
they want to learn. Change preposition
for knowledge
This
trend is being followed by nearly the whole population around the globe. However
, some people
argue that all the things uploaded in
the net are not genuine. I believe that the reliability of Change preposition
on
report
/news Fix the agreement mistake
reports
in
the net depends on the sources they are released from. In Change preposition
on
this
essay, I will focus my discussion on people
’s skill
to surf computers and the sources from which they acquire Fix the agreement mistake
skills
information
.
To commence with, people
who are skilful at surfing internet
claim that websites and social media are Correct article usage
the internet
dependable
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a dependable
source
for education. Change the noun form
sources
For example
, the
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apply
tech savvy
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tech-savvy
people
always admire the
web technology for its efficiency in supplying genuine Correct article usage
apply
information
instantly. They recommend their friends and family members to
utilize modern technology to access the reports they want to read. Fix the infinitive
apply
This
informs that a
skill to Remove the article
apply
search
correct information
using computers can provide humans the
desired and real Add the preposition
with the
information
instantly.
In contrast
, people
who have limited ability to use search
engine
cannot reach the original Fix the agreement mistake
engines
source
of information
. A study revealed that majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
population
who lack Add an article
the population
skills
to explore articles on the web Correct article usage
the skills
complain
that the articles available online are not the best Change the form of the verb
complaining
source
of information
. They argue this
because they reach only to undesired pages when they surf the information
in
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on
internet
. Correct article usage
the internet
Thus
, the incapability to surf and reach original
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the original
source
of education have people
believe that the informative articles on the internet
are not useful.
To conclude, the skilfulness
to utilize Replace the word
skill
search
engine
and Fix the agreement mistake
engines
ability
to reach Correct article usage
the ability
original
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an original
source
of information
leaves impression
to Add an article
an impression
people
whether the knowledgeable things that are uploaded on the online platform are reliable or not. Since all the information
online are
not true, we need to develop Change the verb form
is
command
to use the Correct article usage
a command
internet
to receive correct knowledge.Submitted by dilliupt on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite