Internet is a great source of information and has opened up opportunities for all people to learn all over the world. Some people think all information reliable on the internet. Rest think otherwise. What is your opinion?

In
contemporary
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the contemporary
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era, humankind
use
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the
internet
to
search
knowledge
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for knowledge
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they want to learn.
This
trend is being followed by nearly the whole population around the globe.
However
, some
people
argue that all the things uploaded
in
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the net are not genuine. I believe that the reliability of
report
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reports
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/news
in
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the net depends on the sources they are released from. In
this
essay, I will focus my discussion on
people
’s
skill
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skills
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to surf computers and the sources from which they acquire
information
. To commence with,
people
who are skilful at surfing
internet
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the internet
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claim that websites and social media are
dependable
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a dependable
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source
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sources
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for education.
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,
the
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tech savvy
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people
always admire
the
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web technology for its efficiency in supplying genuine
information
instantly. They recommend their friends and family members
to
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utilize modern technology to access the reports they want to read.
This
informs that
a
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skill to
search
correct
information
using computers can provide humans
the
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desired and real
information
instantly.
In contrast
,
people
who have limited ability to use
search
engine
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engines
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cannot reach the original
source
of
information
. A study revealed that
majority
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of
population
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the population
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who lack
skills
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the skills
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to explore articles on the web
complain
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that the articles available online are not the best
source
of
information
. They argue
this
because they reach only to undesired pages when they surf the
information
in
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on
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internet
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the internet
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.
Thus
, the incapability to surf and reach
original
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the original
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source
of education have
people
believe that the informative articles on the
internet
are not useful. To conclude, the
skilfulness
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to utilize
search
engine
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engines
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and
ability
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the ability
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to reach
original
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an original
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source
of
information
leaves
impression
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an impression
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to
people
whether the knowledgeable things that are uploaded on the online platform are reliable or not. Since all the
information
online
are
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not true, we need to develop
command
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a command
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to use the
internet
to receive correct knowledge.
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