With access to the internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should thus limit access to the internet for their children. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, all communicated devices and social platforms play a vital role in children’s growth to spoil their future. Because, as a parent must provide limited access to the wifi facility for their teenagers.
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, I agree that, by using continuous accessibility of the communicated devices, and a social network, they can’t achieve anything in their life, and
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it can promote more negative experiences in their life. I begin with, by using communicating apparatus, it would help to make communicate with international students, they can make student groups and can share a variety of knowledge, ideas, and creativity.
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as the toddlers simultaneously use any kind of internet accessibility device they are not concentrating on their academics.
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, during
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pandemic, more children’s are not concentrating on their studies, because they are spending more time playing games, and
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without parents acknowledgement, how to spend some money from their father’s credit card, because card detail is linked with their mobile phones.
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, Because, it would create harmful thoughts like revenge porn, the proliferation of fake news, and internet predation who are using the social and internet community randomly.
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, as the situation created like without social media we can’t able to do anything, few teenagers they can be misusing those facilities.
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, nowadays, both the parents are working somewhere, during
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corona period everywhere classes being online. So, they can get a chance to access the internet-connected electronic devices prominently, but few of them are getting bad experiences from that connectivity. In conclusion, while using those websites communities, it would create a negative impact on teenagers than one positive.
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, adults should provide limited access to their youngsters, it may be reduced to many young children not spoiling their life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dangerous situations
  • limit access to the internet
  • inappropriate content
  • online predators
  • physical and mental health
  • monitoring and guiding
  • online safety
  • school curriculum
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