Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregin language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country . Others say that these are not the only reasons ehy somrone should learn a foreign language . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, more
people
are eager to learn a
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foreign
language
, while travelling and working might be the only reason
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.
However
, someone would
claimed
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that these are not the only reason which
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people
to learn
foregin
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foreign
lanuguage
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language
languages
. From my point of view, I do agree with learning a
foregin
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foreign
language
will certainly with more
reasons
behind rather than travelling and working.
First
of all, travelling and working in
foregin
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foreign
countries become more popular for
people
to learn a new
language
. Take
Japanese
as an example, most of
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Hongkongers
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love travelling in Japan and it leads to an increase in demand
of
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learning
Japanese
recent years. Most importantly, most
of
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Japanese
are not good at English and they prefer to speak in
local
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language
all the time. For better
communication
, speaking
Japanese
become the only way to communicate with the locals.
This
is not only apply
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to travel
,
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but
also
to work. Hong Kong
people
with
advantage
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of knowing
Japanese
are more competitive in job
haunting
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hunting
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.
For instance
, to increase the chance of having job interviews.
Conversely
, travelling and working is undoubtedly not the only reason for
people
to learn a
foregin
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foreign
language
,
also
with other
reasons
like
interest
to
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culture
and necessity of
communication
with partners or family. Most youngsters are willing to learn something which is attractive to them.
Language
is one of them.
For instance
, when they watch
Korean
dramas and shows, they would have more
interest
on
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local
culture
, and even admiration of
Korean
pop stars.
This
would
also
raise their
interest
to learn a new
language
. Apart from that, imagine if you are having a partner who is
Korean
. You would definitely learn
Korean
because it's necessary for you two to intimately communicate with each other.
Korean
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Korea
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becomes the only tool for
communication
. I strongly agree with there are more
reasons
for learning a new
language
rather than travel and work. Take
myself
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as an example, I was learning
Spanish
due to
interest
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my interest
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to
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in
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culture
only. After I watched one of the
Spanish
Netflix
drama
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dramas
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, I had a strong
interest
in
Spanish
culture
and found it is very cool to learn
Spanish
. The accent of characters and
pronounciation
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pronunciation
drew my attention a lot.
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I love
Spanish
food a lot since they are extremely delicious. That's why I started my journey to learn
Spanish
. In short, many
reasons
of
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for
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learning a new thing are prevalent, of course including
to learn
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learning
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a new foreign
language
. It could be a leisure activity for
people
,
interest
, and even a
communication
tool with your intimate partner. And I do believe learning is unstoppable and meaningful, it's
favaourable
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favourable
for all of us in long run.
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