Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In the 21st century,
world
economy is developing day-by-day Add an article
the world
therefore
many self-made business
initiatives are growing instead
of working with well-organized companies. In this
essay, I will explain the causes and disadvantages of this
subject with relevant examples.
Technological advancement made significant changes in the field of entrepreneurship although
, it is stabilized individual creativity and enhanced self-generated industries in rural areas. To support this
small scale business
like locally produced groceries, match Box factories, honey making and weaving products are the results of this
revolution. However
, education and the
governmental economic support Correct article usage
apply
result
young Add the preposition
inresult
fromresult
people
entry to
the Change preposition
into
business
sectors
because it creates self-confidence and self-development among unemployed youths. Fix the agreement mistake
sector
On the other hand
, people
are always seek
for comfortability whereby,they can bring individual responsibility to self-employed work. Change the verb form
are always seeking
For example
, According to the ministry of the Human Resources Department in India point out that 63% of self employees started their business
because of discomfort in big industries. To put it another way,these workers Correct your spelling
intolerant
tolerate
intolerate
Add a missing verb
are intolerate
with
the multinational companies profit-making labour laws.
Change preposition
of
Moreover
,there are many disadvantages vested on self-generated employment. Firstly
, in developing and underdeveloped countries it will increase inequality because only rich people
can make business
. Although
, government
always support economically stable Add an article
the government
people
for loans and subsidies.Secondly
, it increased exploitation and economic insufficiency among poor people
.For instance
, rich younger people
get more opportunity
than educated poor Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
people
.For illustrate
Change the verb form
illustrating
this
African countries like Sudan and Nigeria now facing economic disparities because 70% of national money located
to rich self employees. Resultantly, it Add a missing verb
is located
mobilise
unemployment among Change the verb form
mobilises
rest
of the poor Correct article usage
the rest
people
.
In conclusion, there is a saying 'a coin has two sides similarly
self-employment generate constructive and destructive growth on society. So whoever planning to start a new business
make sure that it won't curtail the development of human beings.Submitted by sooryag03 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!