Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In the 21st century,
world
economy is developing day-by-day Add an article
the world
therefore
many self-made Linking Words
business
initiatives are growing Use synonyms
instead
of working with well-organized companies. In Linking Words
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essay, I will explain the causes and disadvantages of Linking Words
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subject with relevant examples.
Technological advancement made significant changes in the field of entrepreneurship Linking Words
although
, it is stabilized individual creativity and enhanced self-generated industries in rural areas. To support Linking Words
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small scale Linking Words
business
like locally produced groceries, match Box factories, honey making and weaving products are the results of Use synonyms
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revolution. Linking Words
However
, education and Linking Words
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governmental economic support Correct article usage
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result
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people
entry Use synonyms
to
the Change preposition
into
business
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sectors
because it creates self-confidence and self-development among unemployed youths. Fix the agreement mistake
sector
On the other hand
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people
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are always seek
for comfortability whereby,they can bring individual responsibility to self-employed work. Change the verb form
are always seeking
For example
, According to the ministry of the Human Resources Department in India point out that 63% of self employees started their Linking Words
business
because of discomfort in big industries. To put it another way,these workers Use synonyms
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intolerant
tolerate
intolerate
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are intolerate
with
the multinational companies profit-making labour laws.
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of
Moreover
,there are many disadvantages vested on self-generated employment. Linking Words
Firstly
, in developing and underdeveloped countries it will increase inequality because only rich Linking Words
people
can make Use synonyms
business
. Use synonyms
Although
, Linking Words
government
always support economically stable Add an article
the government
people
for loans and subsidies.Use synonyms
Secondly
, it increased exploitation and economic insufficiency among poor Linking Words
people
.Use synonyms
For instance
, rich younger Linking Words
people
get more Use synonyms
opportunity
than educated poor Fix the agreement mistake
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illustrate
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illustrating
this
African countries like Sudan and Nigeria now facing economic disparities because 70% of national money Linking Words
located
to rich self employees. Resultantly, it Add a missing verb
is located
mobilise
unemployment among Change the verb form
mobilises
rest
of the poor Correct article usage
the rest
people
.
In conclusion, there is a saying 'a coin has two sides Use synonyms
similarly
self-employment generate constructive and destructive growth on society. So whoever planning to start a new Linking Words
business
make sure that it won't curtail the development of human beings.Use synonyms
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