Some people say that public sports facilities improve people health problems. Others argue that this development has insignificant effects on public health. Discuss both views and give your opinion

While some
citizens
argue that the provision of public
sports
facilities has
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effect on improving public
health
,others,
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contrast,think that it has no considerable impact on the
health
of general
citizens
.
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views and explains why I think the need for
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facility
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is incredibly important. On one hand,many
citizens
and I believe that the development of
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for physical activities can have
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effect on the mind and body well-being of individuals.If
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access to facilities
such
as tennis,badminton and other
sports
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an affordable,reasonable price,people do not fear to
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to spend their
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exercising.
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,any free or cost-effective provisions,motivate dwellers to challenge their comfort zone.
As a result
,the major cause of obesity,which is, less bodily movements can be eliminated.So,the
health
complications can be minimised to a greater extent.
On the other hand
,few others defend that there is no need for any capital investment
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physical activity centres.For these people,the
citizens
of the nation have no
time
,amidst their tightly packed work schedule.Despite the construction of
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attractive
sports
facility,non-availability of
time
will only result in
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loss of money. Evidently,individuals do not find
time
to stand and stare,or
in other words
,more specifically, the
sports
buildings are no benefit for
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public.
Instead
,more awareness can be instigated for the reduced intake of junk and unhealthy products. In conclusion,despite the belief of few that funding in
sports
wouldn’t benefit human society as there is not enough
time
for them to utilise the facility,like many others,I strongly agree with the plan of introducing recreational centres for the
health
benefits of all.
Therefore
,it is strongly recommended for the emergence of leisure activities.
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