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Some people say that public sports facilities improve people health problems. Others argue that this development has insignificant effects on public health. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Sports
 help to maintain both the physical and mental well being of
people
. In many ,countries public
sports
facilities
 have been well established to improve the quality of
people
's lives.
However
, while some
people
 highly appreciate it, some
people
 think in a totally different manner about it. Here l am going to discuss both these views in detail. The establishment of public health
facilities
 directly helps to enhance health. Because
,
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people
 can afford all these
facilities
 without paying for them. Especially, it is an advantage for urban communities.
Moreover
, it allows
people
 to spend their free time in a useful way. As well as involved in
sports
 help them to get rid of their busy lifestyle. Despite that, the availability of public
sports
facilities
 helps to allocate time for
sports
. For example, when someone is free at night he or she can do
sports
 without any burden.
However
, some
people
 think that public
sports
facilities
 cause a detrimental impact on public health. Because all these
facilities
 are easily accessible for anyone, thereby hygienic problems could occur. For ,example public places were not allowed for
people
 during the corona pandemic. Other than that
people
 say that those things are not established under the supervision of experts,
therefore
these equipment
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 can cause harm to the
people
. As well as there are no coaches to supervise
people
, and they have to do
sports
 with their own knowledge. Eventually, l would like to conclude that public
sports
facilities
 provide great service to the community,
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however
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 all these things should be maintained well under the supervision of experts to make it more useful.
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