Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More and more
students
are now going
to
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abroad for their education.I agree with the statement it is beneficial for their own
nation
.
Firstly
, they get more
knowledge
about foreign culture
,
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and learn how the good living they live and find
difference
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the difference
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between them and in own and applied in there
life
. They
also
teach to our family and relatives so they can apply in there
life
and
also
live a good
life
, which makes better
life
in
home
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country
.Another thing is that
,
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they learn new things about technology and
study
, I think which are not provided in theIR own
country
. It is the
also
main reason for
students
who go abroad for their
study
. After complete
study
when they return in own
country
,
then
they can teach to other-regarding new technology and
also
research on that and can give better attribute to our
country
.
They
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also
able to teach other rural
students
, which they get
knowledge
.
Secondly
, after complete
study
, they get better job
opportunity
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in other nations.If
students
get better pay than their
country
then
they
also
settled there and give financial help to their guardians. By sending money from abroad to our
country
also
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economical benefit for there
home
country
. Because it increases the demand
of
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own
nation
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currency, which results increase
the
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price of
currency
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.Another benefit for
home
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nation
is that more and more
students
go in abroad increase the skilled labour in their
home
nation
. Because some time which skill they learn from
outer
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nation
, cannot learn from
home
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country
due to important and linked
study
material and tacher with that level of
knowledge
are not available. In conclusion,
study
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in abroad has more advantages for their
home
country
due to different levels of
knowledge
, economical benefits for their
country
and family and
also
learning good skills and good living values.
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