More and more people nowadays are learning on the Internet of going to class. What are the advantages of learning online? Do you think online learning can totally replace the classroom learning?

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In the era of
this
modern world, everything is getting modified whether it is business, education,daily jobs or entertainment. Everybody is involved in the use of machines in some ways. Online learning is making its place in student lives. It is playing a vital role in getting educated, but
classroom
learning is having its own place. I will discuss both methods of learning in
this
essay and give my opinion about it at the
last
. As we know, In
this
busy world nobody have enough time to go to the institutes to gather information. E-learning is a time saver and the cost of transportation is reduced because we can study while leaning on our bed. As in
classroom
learning the cost of transportation is included.some of the students have to travel miles because no transportation is provided in some of the areas as well as schools and colleges are far from their homes. We can gather more information on the internet as well. Thousand of topics are available on the internet which gives us more ideas for doing our presentations and assignments. The use of technology is beneficial for people with physical disabilities as they can learn from home. Individuals get more capable to be self-dependent as well as managing their time. They have more opportunities to work from home while they are learning. while in
classroom
learning students can ask questions to their teacher whenever they find any difficulties. As well as many experiments are done in classrooms which are more practical than watching them on computers. Kids make more friends in class rather than online. because they come from various backgrounds and they become more sociable persons. They learn more about discipline while in the
classroom
rather than online. with my personal experience about it when I was in school I had to wake up early in the morning to get to school which helped me more to be in a better lifestyle rather than now because I hardly wake up early nowadays because everything is online. Both of the methods of learning are having their own importance, but in my point of ,view online learning will replace traditional learning in upcoming times because we are getting more dependent on technology.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • autonomy
  • global perspective
  • affordability
  • technological proficiency
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