The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Smoking is injurious to

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health, After knowing

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danger

people

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still continue their smoking

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. The causes and

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of it will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. Nowadays,

People

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are easily get stressed due to workload, hectic lifestyle, family issues, responsibilities, etc. These reasons cause smoking just to get out of that stress for a short period of time.

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, many

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are addicted to it because they have gained their smoking

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since

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very

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long because they have started smoking from

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early age. It is

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observed that teenagers

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just to prove themselves cool to

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society or just for their fun but they are not aware that

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can lead them to the very major issues.

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heard that some

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are forced to

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thier

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is how

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gain their smoking

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, there are many ways

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can quit their smoking

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they should be mentally strong because all temptations start from our brain

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, and to avoid that they should be involved in

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activities, yoga, gym, meditation, etc.

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, there are many products are available in the market which can help

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to reduce their smoking

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, there are certain fruits do the same effect

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human

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to quit smoking. Over and above that, Government

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prints or advertises the danger of smoking on the packets of cigarettes or before the starting of movies in theatres to spread awareness in

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. Apart from that,

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should

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limite

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the selling or production of tobacco products and make

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not to

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in public places or if

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still

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they should be fined heavily. Smoking is

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major issue in

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world nowadays. In the recent survey, it has announced that 85% population in

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world smokes cigarettes on

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daily basis and 58% of

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dead

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because of

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and throat cancer.

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should understand the value of their lives and try not to

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and

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help others to get aware of it.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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