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Some people think children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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 groups of individuals claim that young children should be given the liberty to attempt mistakes.
On the contrary
, some argued that adults must stop teenagers from doing bad things . In my perspective, I believe that kids should be given enough time to realise their mistakes. On the one hand, parents should stop their
offsprings
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 from doing something wrong.
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 child 's mind is like a sponge and can easily absorb all bad habits quickly. It will later become a part of their lifestyle and discontinuing them become nearly impossible.
For instance
, students that started drinking and using drugs in
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childhood , later
they
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become addicted to
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. It will quite
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 to return to normal life.
On the other hand
, it is true that experience is a great teacher. School goers learn great lessons from the outcomes of dreadful incidents . They will become alert in the future to attempt that
next
timr
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. They will remember all lessons for
lifetime
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. In the other words,
teenegers
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teenagers
 might not
taking
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advice
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the advices
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advices
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 their parents seriously. Ultimately,
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 right way to guide them on
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 them. In my view, parents should give their
childrens
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children
children's
 enough knowledge so that they can easily differentiate between right and wrong actions. As
this
 can only come with experience . To conclude,
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 a child's mind is really fragile and one can easily get addicted to
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drugs and alcohol .
However
,
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 thing which
make
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 them learn to not perform
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again is experience.
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