Some say that rich countries should help poor countries with trade, health and education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.
There are three
things
that every people
deserve to have in their life which are healthy Correct your spelling
lifestyle
life style
, Correct your spelling
lifestyle
Education
and running trade. Some groups of people
thinks
that Change the verb form
think
the
rich Correct article usage
apply
countries
should have responsibilities
to support Fix the agreement mistake
responsibility
the
poor Correct article usage
apply
countries
. In this
essay, I will illustrate some dark side
and brighter Fix the agreement mistake
sides
side
of Fix the agreement mistake
sides
this
phenomenon with respectfully
circumstances.
Poor Change the adverb
respectful
countries
can not affordable even for taking education
and other medical facilities. There are lots
of reasons behind this
circumstances. Correct determiner usage
these
First
and for most, Business
have Fix the agreement mistake
Businesses
not
Add the particle
tonot
take
any risk for investing Wrong verb form
taken
money
on
poor cities Change preposition
in
side
. For that, People
can not get all opportunities of three basics
Replace the word
basic
things
of life. For example
, It is thruth
of the Correct your spelling
truth
world
that well educated
person open any business Add a hyphen
well-educated
in
Correct your spelling
infamous
famous
country, Where they will see their future plan. Add an article
the famous
Secondly
, many of the farmers are belongs to poor
Add an article
the poor
side
of countries
. In addition
, They puts
Change the verb form
put
lots
of focus on doing only farming behalf
of Change preposition
on behalf
the
Correct article usage
apply
education
and other fields. Last
but not least, Money
is very
important Correct article usage
a very
things
to pursue every Fix the agreement mistake
thing
dreams
. Change to a singular noun
dream
Additionally
, Poor people
can not arrange money
for education
and buisness
in Correct your spelling
business
this
high tech world
.
Rich people
have lots
of money
for investing to
poor Change preposition
in
countries
and some of them are doing this
. It is good things
to do and Fix the agreement mistake
thing
benefits
of that are following up. Poor Correct article usage
the benefits
people
also
have some extraordinary skills but due to lack of money
they can not see their skills in front of the Add a comma
,money
world
. For that, Rich
Add an article
a Rich
person
take responsibility Fix the agreement mistake
people
of
them to show their talent in the Change preposition
for
world
. So, it will beneficial for them as well as their countries
. For example
, We see lots
of example in any realities
show that any capable person who arrange Fix the agreement mistake
reality
money
for talented people
to take part in competition
.
In conclusion, Any basic Add an article
the competition
a competition
things
of World
Correct article usage
the World
is
running on Change the verb form
are
people
either
they are poor or rich. If Correct word choice
whether
government
will see their nation Add an article
the government
on
Change preposition
as
developing
nation ,So they should neglect the difference Correct article usage
a developing
of
poor and rich and Change preposition
between
given
equal opportunity for everyone.Wrong verb form
give
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