Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Certainly, employment is mandatory to earn bread, cloth and shelter.
However
, in Linking Words
this
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competative
era, people prefer to do their own Correct your spelling
competitive
business
Use synonyms
instead
of working under any other Linking Words
company
's proprietor. Use synonyms
This
essay will describe the reason for Linking Words
this
along with Linking Words
demerits
of Correct article usage
the demerits
self employment
.
On the one side, by opening their own Add a hyphen
self-employment
business
people are fully freed to give their best. Use synonyms
Moreover
, they are not underpressurized to Linking Words
fullfil
their Correct your spelling
fulfil
work
on time. They will be able to do it according to their availability. Use synonyms
For instance
, If a man is doing Linking Words
work
in any other organisation he just Use synonyms
do
his Change the verb form
does
work
as an employee just to complete his hours at Use synonyms
job
. He will not fully productive over Add an article
the job
a job
their
because of certain rules and regulations in the Replace the word
there
company
. while in his own Use synonyms
business
he Use synonyms
try
to give his best to reach the top of Change the verb form
tries
gold
mine.
On the other side, there are some negative sides of Add an article
a gold
the gold
self employment
Add a hyphen
self-employment
also
. Linking Words
Firstly
, the whole responsibility is on an individual itself. Linking Words
For example
, if he will not Linking Words
doing
Wrong verb form
do
work
hard Use synonyms
then
he will be responsible for the whole loss but if he is working under any other Linking Words
company
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then
he Linking Words
do
not need to think about the profit and loss of the Change the verb form
does
company
he just Use synonyms
need
to do his own Change the verb form
needs
work
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, he will try to earn more and more in Linking Words
such
circumstances he might prefer to avoid his family which may Linking Words
Change the verb form
result
results
daily minor fights and frustrations in the family members.
To conclude, Add the preposition
inresults
fromresults
Correct your spelling
no doubt
nodoubt
all youngsters Correct pronoun usage
I nodoubt
donot
want to do Correct your spelling
do not
don't
work
under any restrictions. Use synonyms
Hence
, they prefer to do Linking Words
his
own Correct pronoun usage
their
business
Use synonyms
instead
of working under someone, but they are not able Linking Words
make
Add the particle
to make
balance
between their personal and professional life which Add an article
a balance
the balance
results
disputes in their family members. Add the preposition
inresults
fromresults
Hence
, it is recommended to people that they should make their decision wisely whether they would like to Linking Words
work
under any organisation or by themselves.Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...