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More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, so there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspaper. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

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Nowadays, there are several modes available in order to access information.
Although
 printed books, magazines and newspapers provide access to information, many people are of the opinion that they find using computers and electric devices much easier to get the same data. In
this
 essay, I will be stating my opinion that using gadgets is more flexible. There are two primary reasons for
this
.
To begin
 with, one of the important advantages of using a computer is that it helps individuals in accessing the content in a much faster way.
Moreover
, nowadays the present generation prefers carrying devices
such
 as mobile phones, laptops and other gadgets with them, rather than carrying materials
such
 as books and newspapers as they find these electronic devices very handy.
For instance
, a recent study done in India showed that there is an increasing need for the production of mobile phones as both the younger and the older generations are in need of convenient ways to access data.
Subsequently
, making it the more
prefered
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preferred
 option.
Further
 and even more importantly, people find reading magazines and papers difficult.
Additionally
, it is
also
 very
time consuming
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 for individuals who want to quickly read through some important topics they need.
For example
, in many ,countries most university students
while
 preparing for their
examination
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 use
the
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electronic
device
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devices
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 to study rather than
using
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textbooks and assignments.
As a result
 of which, the time is less consuming. By way of conclusion, I reaffirm my position that
although
 using hard copies has many advantages, many people prefer using electric gadgets as it is more convenient and
also
help
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 in saving time and energy.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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