In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

It is a controversial topic that who should give the

finance

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support to the old when they go to live in a home with other old

people

where there are nurses to look after them. In my opinion, the government should pay for

this

.

Firstly

, in my view, it is the government’s duty to distribute the society resources properly. To be more specific,

government

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the government

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should protect

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vulnerable groups like

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,

woman

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women

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and the old. Living in a home with other old

people

and being

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after by nurses is good for the old not only physically but

also

mentally. They will not feel lonely and isolated communicate with

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similar age

people

. What’s more , they can be

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and

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as soon as possible when they have health problems. The reason for

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senior citizen has the

rights

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to get health

care

no matter from good backgrounds or

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backgrounds. Governments should take the payment to

this

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so that everyone can get good

care

equally.

Secondly

, it can promote the job opportunity, because it needs a lot of nurses, doctors or

care

workers. If governments can pay for

this

, it can attract a lot of professional

people

to work in

this

industry. It can solve the problem of employment issues and talent shortage issues

Finally

, as a country

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has

complete

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health

care

system, it can improve the state

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. More talented

people

will

be attract

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by

this

policy because they want to get good

care

after retirement. In conclusion,

government

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the government

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should take the payment of looking after the old

people

allow them

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professional cares,