In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

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support to the old when they go to live in a home with other old
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where there are nurses to look after them. In my opinion, the government should pay for
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, in my view, it is the government’s duty to distribute the society resources properly. To be more specific,
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should protect
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vulnerable groups like
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and the old. Living in a home with other old
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and being
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after by nurses is good for the old not only physically but
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mentally. They will not feel lonely and isolated communicate with
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similar age
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. What’s more , they can be
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and
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as soon as possible when they have health problems. The reason for
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senior citizen has the
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to get health
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no matter from good backgrounds or
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backgrounds. Governments should take the payment to
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so that everyone can get good
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equally.
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, it can promote the job opportunity, because it needs a lot of nurses, doctors or
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workers. If governments can pay for
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, it can attract a lot of professional
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to work in
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industry. It can solve the problem of employment issues and talent shortage issues
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, as a country
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has
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health
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system, it can improve the state
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. More talented
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by
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policy because they want to get good
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after retirement. In conclusion,
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should take the payment of looking after the old
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allow them
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professional cares,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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