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Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre school age. Others working parents think that family members such as grandparents are better caregivers for their young children. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Nurturing a
child
 with good moral values is the toughest thing that
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 of working
parents
 are encountering these days.
This
 is the reason as to why opinions are divided whether the close relatives or the professionals of childcare are a perfect choice to take care of young
ones
;
however
,
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 tends towards the latter view as they are equipped with better training to handle the upbringing of young
ones
. To commence with,many a
full- time
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 employed parent leave their offspring under the supervision of their close
ones
, thinking that owing to the blood relation, their elder
ones
 will
upbring
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bring
 their
child
 in a way they will do.
Thus
,they consider them as their replica and leave the onus of instilling moral values on elder
parents
.
Nevertheless
,what they fail to realise is that the grandparents themselves might be suffering from several health ailments in that fragile age ,and
evenif
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even if
 they want to spend quality time with their grandchildren and educate them with good thoughts and views,their medical constraints
donot
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do not
don't
 allow them to do so,which in severe cases can make them the witness of accidents.
For instance
, several
child
 accidents were recorded in Canada
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and the majority happened when the supervisor was the
child
's
non working
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 family member.
On the contrary
,some
parents
 trust the services offered by renowned day-care centres more reliable as these centres claim to provide a lot of physical and mental activities required for the holistic development of a
child
, under the watchful eye of a team of specialists.
Hence
,they feel quite safe to leave their toddlers in the hands of experts who know the ins and outs of taking good care of a
child
,thereby minimising the chances of any carelessness by their staff.
For instance
, several
child
-care centres have given
an
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 year of professional training
of
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 early
child
-care and
diploma
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 in Human resources and development as a pre-requisite to join their centre. In conclusion,
although
 some
parents
 prefer the bond of trust while choosing the
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care-giver
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,
this
 essay finds that the trained staff of the day-care institute, because of the expertise in training,will do the job efficiently.
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