Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre school age. Others working parents think that family members such as grandparents are better caregivers for their young children. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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with good moral values is the toughest thing that

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of working

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are encountering these days.

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is the reason as to why opinions are divided whether the close relatives or the professionals of childcare are a perfect choice to take care of young

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tends towards the latter view as they are equipped with better training to handle the upbringing of young

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. To commence with,many a

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employed parent leave their offspring under the supervision of their close

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, thinking that owing to the blood relation, their elder

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will

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bring

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in a way they will do.

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,they consider them as their replica and leave the onus of instilling moral values on elder

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,what they fail to realise is that the grandparents themselves might be suffering from several health ailments in that fragile age ,and

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they want to spend quality time with their grandchildren and educate them with good thoughts and views,their medical constraints

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allow them to do so,which in severe cases can make them the witness of accidents.

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accidents were recorded in Canada

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and the majority happened when the supervisor was the

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family member.

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trust the services offered by renowned day-care centres more reliable as these centres claim to provide a lot of physical and mental activities required for the holistic development of a

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, under the watchful eye of a team of specialists.

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,they feel quite safe to leave their toddlers in the hands of experts who know the ins and outs of taking good care of a

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,thereby minimising the chances of any carelessness by their staff.

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-care centres have given

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year of professional training

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in Human resources and development as a pre-requisite to join their centre. In conclusion,

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prefer the bond of trust while choosing the

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essay finds that the trained staff of the day-care institute, because of the expertise in training,will do the job efficiently.