increment of prices in petro is best solution for traffic and environmental problems

Environmental pollution and
traffic
jams are the main sophisticated problems of all over the world while majority of the society think it's due to the
gases
emission by
petrol
combusion in
vehicles
. As it's enunciated by the proportion of the society, prices of
petrol
should increased to prevent from
this
situation while others in contradictory view that
this
apprehension is useless. throughout my essay I will venture and pursue speculative hypothesisi by elaborating my perception. At the same time just as crucially it is conceived as the subject to the strictest most demanding standard of formal assessment with respect to the basic requirement of logical rigour and conceptual precision.
This
apprehension is unwarrented. In my perspective that
traffic
and pollution problems mainly arised due to the other alternative ways than the
gases
emission by the
petrol
combusion. I provide an interesting characterization and exemplify the essential elements to justify my claim.
Traffic
jams are mainly arising due to the poor management in urban transport system. According to the researches done by the Harved University, 40% of city roads in UK are facing heavy
traffic
due to the poor management of the city road constructions. Whereas decreasing the number of
vehicles
in road by increasing the
petrol
prices to prevent
traffic
is not a better option [15:09, 31/12/2021] Poojana: for
this
crisis without proper management. Albeit, majority of the population using
vehicles
and rapid increment of the
petrol
will lead economical effect for their monthly salary budget.
however
, there are many other alternative methods to prevent environmental pollution by the carbon monoxide released by the
petrol
emission
gases
. As an example electric, solar power and other renewble energy sources
vehicles
are acceptable preventive method for harmful
gases
releases by the carbon fuel.
Otherwise
it will lead economical problem for the populatio
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