Some people say that it is necessary to use animals for testing the medicines intended for human beings, others however think it is cruel and unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Scientists when they manufacture a new
medicine
they will test the
medicine
on
animals
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but
some
people
believe it is a
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very
ruthless act. From the early days,
people
are suffering from many diseases in order to make
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lead
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healthy life researchers will manufacture
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medicines.
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launching the product in the market they will
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tested
it many ways. Mostly they will test it on the
animals
because
animals
are living beings as
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. They will give
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similar reactions
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medicine
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human beings.These are the reasons,
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animals
are used for testing. Now coming to the other view of
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point
,few
people
think it is very cruel to test on
animals
.Because they too have to suffer from the pain.
instead
of using
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source for testing.But if we
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consideration
then
we may have to go through
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many problems.Without
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if we take the
medicine
directly
then
,
people
have to experience the other problems
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from the drugs negative reaction.Researchers main aim is to save
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human life and to serve
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society. To
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,
medicine
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tested on
animals
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society good healthy and a
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life.
on the other
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some
people
say it is very heartless.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Controversial
  • Ethical considerations
  • Inhumane
  • Medical advancements
  • Alternative methods
  • Regulations
  • Animal welfare
  • Scientific gains
  • Technological advancements
  • Animal rights
  • Experimentation
  • Insights
  • Therapies
  • Enforce
  • Respect
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