Some people believe that tourism is beneficial while other believe that tourism causes problem. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion

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two or three decades,

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tourism

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industry has been improving tremendously than ever before due to more and more folks are

visited

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.

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, while some think that

tourism

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gives more advantages to

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, others say that

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can create troubles among the nation.

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essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand,

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is the most

mony

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money

earning aspect for countrys' economy. To be more precise,

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can earn a huge volume of money,

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, the authority could be used

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amount for nations' infrastructure.

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, Thailand earns one million dollars number from

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apply

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tourism

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in

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each year,

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, they provide free education and medical for theirs' citizens;

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means they use

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volume to

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people's needs and wants.

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,

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is the best chance to would spread a particular states'

value

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values

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,

tradition

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traditions

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and

culture

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cultures

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to

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around the world.

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,

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gives more advantages to the host states' population as well as the government.

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, despite

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gives

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more benefits, the local residents can suffer a lot. like traffic congestion and

over crowding

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overcrowding

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, as a consequence, the local vendors always focus on the visitors,

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, they might be increased products' price.

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,

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the one chance to other countrys' public enter into

other territory

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another territory

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like migrants;

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, France gives more tourist visa to around the world,

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, countless persons can easily enter to

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state from

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their

own homeland.

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, these are the troubles are available in

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. To conclude,

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tourism

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industry gives more profits to the countrys' economy undoubtedly. Enhancing financial status and spreading tradition

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around the globe. Immigrants can enter easily and the local residents suffer many problems from

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.

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, in my opinion, about

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,

tourism

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is beneficial for the population as well as nations.