You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to the issue that I am currently facing with my accommodation. Even though I was comfortable at the beginning,

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, it has become difficult to tolerate over the recent past.

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with, I share my room with another student and he seems to be awake all night listening to very loud music.

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, he often has visitors to the room, which is quite disturbing.

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, I am not able to have a good sleep and am unable to concentrate on my studies.

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situation is adversely affecting my grades at college.

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, I request you to kindly change my roommate to someone who is much more considerate, or even I am more than happy to live alone.

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, I am still fine with shifting to a smaller room, if I'm on my own, as I think that way it would be more peaceful. Thank you for your consideration, Yours sincerely, John Smith

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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accommodation officer
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share a room
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difficult to work
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