Many people believe that modern inventions have brought more problems than the benefit. Do you agree or disagree?
In
todays
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today's
time
lot
of inventions Correct article usage
a lot
done
, mostly in Add a missing verb
are done
technology
. So it is the
matter of debate do these new searches Correct article usage
a
also
stand new problems for us . I think devolping
new Correct your spelling
developing
technology
is good for us, so I completely disagree with the statement.
Firstly
, new technology
is power
saving .Energy
is also
a big issue for us,
because without Remove the comma
apply
energy
it is difficult to think our
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about our
life
.Energy
or power
is Correct your spelling
everywhere
every where
in Correct your spelling
everywhere
shape
of Add an article
the shape
electercity
and Correct your spelling
electricity
fules
like petrol, diesel and gas . These types of Correct your spelling
fuels
files
energy
source is
only Change the verb form
are
limted
available . So it is Correct your spelling
limited
necassery
to save . It is impossible without inventing new inventions, without decreasing our demand . Example LED bulbs are Correct your spelling
necessary
big
invention by engineers, which decrease Add an article
a big
the
lot of Change the article
a
power
consumption without limting
our demands and give better light Correct your spelling
limiting
then
old bulbs.
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than
Secondly
, new ssearches
make our Correct your spelling
searches
researchers
life
more easy
, Replace the words
easier
confertable
and safe . Correct your spelling
comfortable
Machines
are very
good example which makes our Add an article
a very
life
better . With machines
we are more capable to do difficult work and Add a comma
,machines
also
save
our Wrong verb form
saving
time
,
because Remove the comma
apply
machines
are fast . They make our life
easy and confertable
because Correct your spelling
comfortable
of
we have to only operate them or in modern Change preposition
apply
time
there are also
some automatic machines
in we have to only give commands and they complete work on there own . Devolping
new Correct your spelling
Developing
technology
in Replace the word
medicine
medical
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ismedical
wasmedical
also
safe our life
. There are now lot
of Add an article
a lot
medicens
are invented, which save human beings from dangerous Correct your spelling
medicines
diseas
. Like in Correct your spelling
disease
diseases
this
penadamic
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pandemic
time
invention of covid vaccine safe many Correct your spelling
lives
life
lifes
by protecting our body from coronavirus.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
lives
devolping
our science and Correct your spelling
developing
technology
is not bad for us, because it is power saving
and make our Add a hyphen
power-saving
life
better and safe .Submitted by deepammol on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite