While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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of the society, some individuals are believing global warming is the dominant natural
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among all other
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while others have
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that
deforestation
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harmful
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. Among those dichotomy views of these controversial arguments, I am
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the opinion that both these two global treats have
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. Throughout
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I will venture and pursue the speculative hypothesis by elaborating my perception. At the same time just as crucially, the subject to the
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and logical rigour. I will provide an interesting characterization and exemplify the essential elements to justify my claim. As the view of
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fraction, Global warming is the most dangerous environmental issue at the present movement. Increasing the temperature of the
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many other bad effects on
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human
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and animals too.
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ocean,
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depletion
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increment
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are the many other side
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of
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Harvard University in
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, rapid
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increment
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earth
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changers
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in gas concentration in
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.
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,
this
natural issue
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significant
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effect
on all lives of
earth
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In contrast
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world.
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activities
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of disaster while it is responsible for many other major
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crisis
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in the world. As an instance, ozone layer
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depletion
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unbalance
in gas
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concentration
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and drought are some bad effects of
this
problem.
However
,
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earth
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from
deforestation
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disasters. As an example article in Times newspaper illustrates that 80% of the
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crust being destroyed by the
deforestation
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years
yards
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Hence
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livelihood
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of forest are necessary. In
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deforestation
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harmful
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earth
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both issues is
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necessary
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Greenhouse effect
  • Industrial emissions
  • Sea levels
  • Extreme weather events
  • Biodiversity
  • Carbon emissions
  • Renewable energy
  • Paris Climate Accord
  • Carbon cycle
  • Soil erosion
  • Water cycles
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Reforestation
  • Sustainable forest management
  • Indigenous communities
  • Localized impacts
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