It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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it will be very beneficial for every age group of people .Because aged persons can go for walking in morning or evening hours.

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people and youngsters usually utilise

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they can spend their quality time with their close ones by visiting the

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is totally different from the house.so many different kinds of trees were there and

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the squares and open

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we can utilize the area in many ways

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we can play the

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playground organisation will get the money and it can be used in

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a good environment will create in the society.