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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Nowadays, in most areas of the world, teenagers aren’t really up to date with
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, as they began to avoid buying
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 and watching
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 on TV. In
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 essay, I will discuss the reasons for
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 growing problem and explore possible solutions.
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the difficult language most
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use
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 I will consider how the
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 of social networks may
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 often
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 a difficult vocabulary.
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,
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 could prevent teens from fully understanding the meaning of the article they’re reading
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, and may
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 result in young people considering worldwide
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 as boring. One solution to
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 growing problem could be the creation of more magazines, which could describe and explain these topics to young
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 in a more interesting way. In
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 way, teenagers would be really encouraged to read articles as they would really understand what’s written, and they wouldn’t regard
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 activity as a waste of time. Another reason why teenagers don’t follow worldwide developments may
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 be that they spend too much time on social networks. These days, the
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 and instant chatting services has really become the major form of entertainment for young
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. To avoid
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, teens should be made aware of the existence of many online platforms, which include lots of videos and explanations about the current political and economic situation. Since the majority of
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 are made for young
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, by using them, they could really solve the problem of the boringness of conventional journals. In conclusion,
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 don’t really fit young people’s needs in terms of being simple and interesting. In my opinion,
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 should teach them the importance of being up to date, even by using non-conventional ways of conveying
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