Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spot light. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion.
Celebrities
take media
attention by showing their good and health
living Replace the word
healthy
life
and always choose to be in public
Add an article
the public
Correct your spelling
spotlight
spot light
. But it is quite wrong if they complain about Correct your spelling
spotlight
media
for the interference on
their personal Change preposition
in
life
. I partially agree with the above given
statement and Add a hyphen
above-given
reasons
will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
Correct article usage
the reasons
Celebrities
use media
connection
for their professional Fix the agreement mistake
connections
life
because it is the major platform which
can make them socially active in public. It is Correct pronoun usage
that
also
said in one the
movie that if Change preposition
of the
celebrities
remain to
famous publicly Correct your spelling
too
then
they should be in lime light
most of the time. Correct your spelling
limelight
For example
, if celebrities
spot
in public places regarding their work, concepts, promotions, projects, etc. the Change the form of the verb
spotted
media
will discover them and try to have communication with them. By doing this
, celebrities
stay connected with people socially and physically. Furthermore
, Celebrities
known
by their movies or serials only but through Add the auxiliary verb
are known
media
they Add a comma
,media
also
can be stayed live
and telecasted for their professional meetings and daily activities.
Replace the word
life
However
, we have heard many times that celebrities
complaint
about Replace the word
complain
media
for their interference in their personal life
. Which
is quite obvious that Correct pronoun usage
It
media
should understand the difference between professional and personal life
as it is not only all about their channels and target rating points(TRP) but some one's
personal Correct your spelling
someone's
life
and privacy should be mattered as well. In
instance, Change preposition
For
media
covers celebrities
whenever they find them publicly even if they spot at
any Correct pronoun usage
them at
cafetaria
, restaurants or even in hospitals to visit their friends or loved ones. By that, Correct your spelling
cafeteria
cafeterias
media
spread fake news and rumours about celebrities
and these
Correct pronoun usage
this
is
how their personal and professional Change the verb form
are
life
gets disturbed due to media
's continues interruption and for this
reason celebrities
have their complete rights
to take Fix the agreement mistake
right
actions
over Fix the agreement mistake
action
media
if they are intruding in their privacy for their benefits without any morality or principle.
In the conclusion, Celebrities
have to deal with the media
in a very smart as they have to be with them in
most of the time. Change preposition
apply
Nonetheless
, they also
have completer
right to Correct article usage
a completer
complaint
against them if they find them intruding Replace the word
complain
in
their privacy.Change preposition
on
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