Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spot light. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion.

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Celebrities

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take

media

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attention by showing their good and

health

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living

life

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and always choose to be in

public

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the public

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spotlight

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spot light

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. But it is quite wrong if they complain about

media

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for the interference

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their personal

life

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. I partially agree with the

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statement and

reasons

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the reasons

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will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

Celebrities

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use

media

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connection

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connections

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for their professional

life

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because it is the major platform

which

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that

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can make them socially active in public. It is

also

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said in one

the

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of the

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movie that if

celebrities

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remain

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too

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famous publicly

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they should be in

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most of the time.

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, if

celebrities

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spot

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in public places regarding their work, concepts, promotions, projects, etc. the

media

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will discover them and try to have communication with them. By doing

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celebrities

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stay connected with people socially and physically.

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Celebrities

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known

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by their movies or serials only but through

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media

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they

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can be stayed

live

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and telecasted for their professional meetings and daily activities.

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, we have heard many times that

celebrities

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complaint

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about

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for their interference in their personal

life

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is quite obvious that

media

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should understand the difference between professional and personal

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as it is not only all about their channels and target rating points(TRP) but

some one's

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someone's

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personal

life

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and privacy should be mattered as well.

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instance,

media

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covers

celebrities

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whenever they find them publicly even if they spot

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them at

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any

cafetaria

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cafeteria

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, restaurants or even in hospitals to visit their friends or loved ones. By that,

media

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spread fake news and rumours about

celebrities

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and

these

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how their personal and professional

life

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gets disturbed due to

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's continues interruption and for

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reason

celebrities

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have their complete

rights

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right

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to take

actions

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over

media

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if they are intruding in their privacy for their benefits without any morality or principle. In the conclusion,

Celebrities

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have to deal with the

media

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in a very smart as they have to be with them

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apply

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most of the time.

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, they

also

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have

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a completer

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right to

complaint

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against them if they find them intruding

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their privacy.

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