Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spot light. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion.

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Celebrities
take
media
attention by showing their good and
health
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living
life
and always choose to be in
public
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spotlight
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spot light
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. But it is quite wrong if they complain about
media
for the interference
on
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their personal
life
. I partially agree with the
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statement and
reasons
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the reasons
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will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
Celebrities
use
media
connection
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for their professional
life
because it is the major platform
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can make them socially active in public. It is
also
said in one
the
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movie that if
celebrities
remain
to
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too
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famous publicly
then
they should be in
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most of the time.
For example
, if
celebrities
spot
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in public places regarding their work, concepts, promotions, projects, etc. the
media
will discover them and try to have communication with them. By doing
this
,
celebrities
stay connected with people socially and physically.
Furthermore
,
Celebrities
known
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are known
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by their movies or serials only but through
media
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they
also
can be stayed
live
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life
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and telecasted for their professional meetings and daily activities.
However
, we have heard many times that
celebrities
complaint
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complain
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about
media
for their interference in their personal
life
.
Which
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is quite obvious that
media
should understand the difference between professional and personal
life
as it is not only all about their channels and target rating points(TRP) but
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personal
life
and privacy should be mattered as well.
In
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instance,
media
covers
celebrities
whenever they find them publicly even if they spot
at
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them at
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any
cafetaria
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cafeteria
cafeterias
, restaurants or even in hospitals to visit their friends or loved ones. By that,
media
spread fake news and rumours about
celebrities
and
these
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this
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is
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are
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how their personal and professional
life
gets disturbed due to
media
's continues interruption and for
this
reason
celebrities
have their complete
rights
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right
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to take
actions
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action
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over
media
if they are intruding in their privacy for their benefits without any morality or principle. In the conclusion,
Celebrities
have to deal with the
media
in a very smart as they have to be with them
in
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most of the time.
Nonetheless
, they
also
have
completer
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right to
complaint
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against them if they find them intruding
in
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on
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their privacy.
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