You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers.

Dear Sir or Madam, I write

this

letter to inform you about my inability to continue my evening-part time course on "embedded systems".

Therefore

, I hope you would understand my situation when I explain. As you are aware that I have been working in XYZ company for Three years. I was in charge of the testing and analysis. Recently, they promoted me as principal Invigilator of the project we are working on. So now I have more responsibilities to be taken care and sometimes I am up to my neck on deadlines.

As a result

, it is likely to be unable to concentrate on the course and reap benefits from it. Owing to the new duties assigned to require ultimate focus and hard work. Has there been a chance to manage the course, I would have been completed it. I would like to express my gratitude for your guidance and support to date. Thanks in advance for understanding my situation and helping me to complete formalities in connection with

this

discontinuity. Hope it would be ok with you and looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your's Faithfully Joan

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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7 paragraphs

188 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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