Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, Noticing your advertisement in the classifieds, I found that I'm looking for

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an opportunity. I hope you would allow me to help you in the coming summer when I explain. I am a final year graduate student in business administration at Stanford University.

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, I would like to pursue my post-graduation in an English speaking country.

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, I would be looking for an opportunity to improve my spoken English. I could help you in many possible ways.

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, I can cook food, organize your home and help you with household chores. I would be a good chatting partner for you. I will be available from 7.00am to 10.Am, from 5.30pm to 9pm on weekdays and from 9.00 to 2.00 pm on weekends. If you provide

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opportunity. It would be beneficial for both. I think it is Ok for you and looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Joan

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

156 words

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