Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

These days almost all foods and drinks, which are manufactured by factories, include

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sugar

which is a

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danger

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for our health. Some people argue that increasing the price of

sugar

could

be encourage

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us to eat less

sugar

. I fully disagree with

this

idea and

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essay will provide

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some of the main reasons for

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. The

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main reason for my disagreement with the idea of high pricing of

sugar

is that

instead

of eating fewer

sugar

people will buy the same number of sweets but produced with bad quality. Nowadays there are numerous different products with which

sugar

could be replaced but in case of high pricing for

sugar

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producers will use the cheapest of them to leave their income at an interesting level.

For example

,

sugar

could be replaced by

such

elements as spirulina or xylitol in some products but nobody clear knows their quality. Another matter why I disagree with the above issue is that major buyers will waste less on other healthy products like vegetables or fruits. As it could be aware society change their habits very hard even their health is under hazard. As a tradition,

for instance

, in Russia visiting their relatives or friends guests often bring with them some type of cakes or other different sweets for children especially. To conclude,

although

I disagree that more expensive

sugar

give

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people a chance to consume it less, high pricing of

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should encourage industry

manufactures

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sweet food and drinks with tiny level of

sugar

.