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Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.

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People
 learn through their entire lives. They constantly improve their knowledge and develop. I think that a college or university
education
 should be available to all
students
 because every person has the right to choose the way to self-perfection.
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 I will give some of my reasons to support my position.
First
 of all, every person should have the
chance
 to get a higher degree, gain new knowledge and experience.
However
, some
people
 believe that higher
education
 should be available only to good
students
. I think it is silly. It is like to make unavailable
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 for one who does not have IQ high enough.
Second
 of all, some young
people
 do not do well at school but they have
great
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personality
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 and ability to learn. They are self-confident, persistent and patient. With these
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 they can get higher grades
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 their classmates who are talented but lazy. Imagine
for example
 situation when a teenager gets high grades because his or her parents constantly make him or her study and help to do most of the homework. In
this
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 a child does very good at school but I think a college can show the opposite results.
Finally
, it is a discrimination against
students
 to make available higher
education
 only for good ones. So, if a
students
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 does poor and
gets
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 low grades he/she should be sent down. But if a person was never given a
chance
 to try himself/herself at college what to do in
this
 case? To sum up, I think that all young
people
 should have the
chance
 to get a higher
education
. To take or not
this
chance
 must be up to them.
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