We cannot help everyone in world that needs helps, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Some people argued that tourists should spend more money on sightseeing in cultural or historical places rather than the local visitors. I totally agree with
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view because of several reasons which are discussed in the following paragraphs.
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of all, It is undeniable that we are in a globalisation world nowadays. At
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point, It would be wrong to only consider our nation’s problems due to the fact that everyone in the world is related and disseminated in many global problems
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as climate change issues, economic regression, poverty, inequality in society or severe disasters.
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, the best way that we will be able to face those huge and complex challenges in collaboration, including donating basic needs or educating higher technology to some impoverished
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. Another important reason which should be considered is that helping the most vulnerable peoples must be prioritised,
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in situations where a number of people tend to risk their lives.
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, in the pandemic disaster of a covid virus, some poor
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cannot inadequately access some medical aids and many vaccines so those
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need to get many kinds of all urgent needs as fast as possible.
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, the donations from international charity especially, those of higher capacity
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, is not only the greatest way to help many people to survive, but
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show the existence of our humankind. All things considered, it has been said that we should help in our own society in the
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place.
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, I strongly believe that national boundaries cannot stop one nation from helping those
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where they are in need.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global interconnectivity
  • international cooperation
  • ethics
  • moral obligation
  • geographical borders
  • diplomatic relations
  • economic stability
  • global security
  • resource allocation
  • expertise
  • international aid
  • dependency and development
  • sustainable solutions
  • local and global initiatives
  • community resilience
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